Tuesday, February 4, 2014

More Than Just Words


When I hear the name Robert Frost, I cannot help to think of my 8th grade English teacher, energetically reciting Robert Frost’s “The Road Not Taken.” She would end each sentence with a high-pitched inflection in her voice, which made the poem almost feel like a children’s story. But reading more of Robert Frost’s poems on my own, I am glad to see that he has so much more than just “The Road Not Taken,” even though it is one of my favorite poems by Robert Frost. I enjoy Robert Frost primarily for his robust imagery he uses within his poems. Robert Frost is known for distinct diction style, which for the average reader can be difficult to understand or to merely read his poems. Each time I read one of Robert Frost’s poems, I felt as if I was diving into a new, undiscovered world. Frost pulls the reader in with his descriptive elements of nature, and can almost make you feel as if you are actually there. For example, in Robert Frost’s “The Wood Pile,” from the very beginning of the poem, I felt as if I was going on the same journey Frost was describing and could feel the “hard snow” hold my feet into the ground.
            Robert Frost uses a great deal of imagery in most of his poems, but for some reason, “The Wood Pile” stood out to me the most. The “frozen swamp one gray day,” the view of the “tall slim trees,” the playful competition with the bird he saw, and my favorite, the description of the actual woodpile. Frost writes,

The wood was gray and the bark warping off it
And the pile somewhat sunken. Clematis
Had wound strings round and round it like a bundle.
What held it though on one side was a tree
Still growing, and on one a stake and prop,
These latter about to fall. I thought that only
Someone who lived in turning fresh tasks
Could so forget his handiwork on which
He spent himself, the labor of his ax,
And leave it there far from a useful fireplace
To warm the frozen swamp as best it could
With the slow smokeless burning of decay.

This woodpile is obviously just a dead, rotting pile of wood that someone left behind, but in some strange way, Frost makes this dead woodpile paradoxically come to life. His descriptions of the journey to the woodpile, and even the imagery of the woodpile itself, drew me into this snowy, Narnia-esque world that Frost created. I felt the serenity of nature and could almost hear the silence of the dark, gray afternoon. In the middle of the poem, the sojourner has a playful/competitive interaction with a little bird he finds. I enjoyed how Frost personifies the bird, and if he had not explicitly stated that he saw a bird, it could have almost been like he was describing another person in the sojourner’s midst. The bird was personified with human characteristics, and in a way had a mind of its own. Frost’s “The Wood Pile,” was amazing to read, and while there are many aspects of his poem I more than likely missed or skipped over, Frost’s descriptive language and imagery made this poem real for me.

            In the same way, Mary Oliver is known for her nature themed poetry. She was born in 1935 in Maple Heights, Ohio, but continues her writing career today. For most of her life, Oliver lived in Provincetown, Massachusetts, which is similar to Frost’s residency as well. Mary Oliver reminded me a great deal of Robert Frost, that I almost felt as if they could have been related in someway. Oliver’s sweet, peaceful depiction of nature in her poetry is enjoyable and the images throughout her poetry seem to leap off the page.
Mary Oliver’s “White Eyes,” greatly reminded me of Robert Frost. Although both poems are starkly different in form, rhyme scheme/meter, even in the way they evoke very different emotions, both poems do reveal very clear imagery about them. For instance, in Mary Oliver’s poem, the reader can visualize the setting of nature and can hear the sound of the bird singing in the “tops of the trees.” Again, beginning in line 21 Oliver uses distinct descriptive words to describe the bird, which make the bird come alive to the reader.

I don't know the name of this bird,
    I only imagine his glittering beak
         tucked in a white wing
             while the clouds—

which he has summoned
    from the north—
         which he has taught
             to be mild, and silent—

thicken, and begin to fall
    into the world below
         like stars, or the feathers
               of some unimaginable bird

that loves us,
    that is asleep now, and silent—
         that has turned itself
             into snow.

 As Oliver continues to describe the appearance of the bird, the bird itself has a personality of its own. Similarly to Frost she personifies the singing bird, gives the bird human characteristics. Oliver’s poem is shorter and more simply structured than Frost’s, but overall both poems portray beautiful imagery of nature. The descriptions in each poem make the poems more than just words on a page, but when read carefully and with close attention, the reader will begin to draw close into the poem, and feel apart of the world these writers create.

Tuesday, January 28, 2014

Juxtaposition of Unity and Division: A Look at Walt Whitman and Rita Dove


For this first blog, I will compare and contrast “For You O Democracy” by Walt Whitman and “Wingfoot Lake” by Rita Dove. I enjoyed the historical elements of both poems and looking at the differences in themes of each as well. In this comparison and contrast, we will primarily look at the thematic difference of the two poems.

The title alone of Whitman’s poem is intriguing because Whitman is dedicating this poem to Democracy. And while everyone more than likely knows the definition of democracy, my first thought when I read this was, what exactly is democracy? It is an organization or situation in which everyone is treated equally and has equal rights. This simple definition helped me to grasp the major themes of unity and equality of Whitman’s poem. Whitman describes this permanent, strong, attractive place that is filled with unity and companionship. Through the patriotic language, Whitman will create this land for his “ma femme,” (meaning my woman) which is Democracy. There is a strong sense of unity and equality here in Whitman’s poem. Even the closeness of Democracy being portrayed as Whitman's "woman" displays a picture of unity and companionship. Whitman begins by stating,

Come, I will make the continent indissoluble,
I will make the most splendid race the sun has ever shone upon,
I will make divine, magnetic lands,
            With the love of comrades,
                        With the life-long love of comrades.

Whitman paints this picture of a unified race, the most splendid race even. Whitman continues with the themes of companionship, unity, and the love of comrades. He compares the companionship he will create with the thickness trees along the American riverbanks. Whitman’s poem fosters a sense of strength and a race working together. 

            In stark contrast, "Wingfoot Lake" by Rita Dove makes the reader feels a heavy distance between the people of the poem versus a strong unity and companionship shown in Whitman’s “For You O Democracy.” The poem is set on Independence Day of 1964, and along with patriotic themes, the poem also carries hints of the Civil Rights movement happening during the 1960s. Once the reader reaches the second stanza, a certain heaviness and tension sets in because of the distance between the white people and the black people at the company picnic. Even though there is a sense of unity—by the use of the same Heinz bottles, the same waxy beef patties, and the same Salem potato chips—there is still separation and lack of unity between the whites and blacks during this time. Dove builds her poem on a patriotic holiday, that almost symbolizes the unity of Americans with the celebration of the independence of their country, yet Dove juxtaposes this unity with the separation of blacks and whites, and the tensions of being black during the 1960s.
           
And while Whitman and Dove’s poems do carry contrasting thematic elements, they do share common thematic elements as well. Through the language of Whitman’s “For You O Democracy” and the setting of Dove’s “Wingfoot Lake” the reader can see the theme of patriotism and history throughout each writer’s poems.